An Email to Professor Garfield & A Chat Message to Faisal -- Shiho and Mashiro
subject: request for a meeting
Hello, Professor Garfield
The other students in my group and I gave
our presentation last week. Mr. Anderson suggested that we come and talk to you
because you are an expert on marketing, especially marketing in the food sector.
Therefore, when would it be convenient for you? I am available next Wednesday
at 10.00am, if that would suit you.
Boo Riley
Business Studies 2C group
Hey Faisal
I’ve heard you haven’t uploaded your stuff
of the presentation yet. This was due yesterday :P And if you don’t submit
yours on time, the marks for ours will suffer! You should upload asap.
Lucy and Mike
I think the informal version of your email is quite good! It's not that long sentences and It's direct.
ReplyDeleteIt is a good idea to use :P.
ReplyDeleteI think the ending of formal massage is good.
ReplyDeleteFormer one looks polite, I should've used "available". This is good to use when we have to make e-mail formal.
ReplyDeleteI like the emoticon " :p ". I think it is nice to have a simple email to friends.
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