An Email to Professor Garfield & A Chat Message to Faisal -- Shiho and Mashiro

subject: request for a meeting

 

Hello, Professor Garfield

The other students in my group and I gave our presentation last week. Mr. Anderson suggested that we come and talk to you because you are an expert on marketing, especially marketing in the food sector. Therefore, when would it be convenient for you? I am available next Wednesday at 10.00am, if that would suit you.

 Best regards,

Boo Riley

Business Studies 2C group

 

 

Hey Faisal

I’ve heard you haven’t uploaded your stuff of the presentation yet. This was due yesterday :P And if you don’t submit yours on time, the marks for ours will suffer! You should upload asap.

Lucy and Mike

Comments

  1. I think the informal version of your email is quite good! It's not that long sentences and It's direct.

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  2. I think the ending of formal massage is good.

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  3. Former one looks polite, I should've used "available". This is good to use when we have to make e-mail formal.

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  4. I like the emoticon " :p ". I think it is nice to have a simple email to friends.

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