An Email to Professor Garfield & A Chat Message to Faisal -- Yugo, Usa
To: Professor Garfield
Subject: The planning of the meeting
Dear, Professor Garfield.
I and the other students in my group submitted our presentation last week. Then, Mr. Anderson suggested that we come and talk to you because you are a marketing expert, especially marketing in the food sector. That’s why I would like to ask you when would be convenient for you? If you would like, how about Wednesdays at 10:00 a.m.? I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Boo Riley
Business Studies 2C group
Hi, Faisal!
Be careful that u haven’t uploaded your section of the presentation yet. We want to point out that this was due yesterday, and if you don’t submit your section on time, the marks for our whole project will suffer:(
We hope you will upload this ASAP.
See ya soon
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